I Miss You

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Monday, 06-Jun-2005 15:19:52

I MISS YOU
by
Mel Finefrock

A bit of background. One of my friends wrote music and wanted me to write lyrics for this song, so here they are...

I remember that pretty day outside
when I met you in the grass,
and we talked about a lot of things
even in choir class,
and we became good friends as time passed by.
I never thought we'd say goodbye,
but one day I just had to leave,
move miles and miles away,
and so, my friend, I thought I'd drop a line,
write to you and say,

I miss the way you laugh, the way you walk and talk and sing.
I miss the days we used to play in the sun and do crazy things.
I miss your smile; it was my sunshine that chased away the rain.
I miss my lips upon your cheek for just one second; here's the thing.
I miss you oh, so much my friend, and I hope we meet again.

It's getting harder to stay in touch,
and it kind of gets depressing.
I write songs and music 'cause I miss you so much,
Yes, now, I'm confessing.
I wish that I could see you,
feel your kiss and warm embrace.
I wish that I could hear you;
your voice blows me away!
And so, my friend, I thought I'd drop a line,
write to you and say,

I miss the way you laugh, the way you walk and talk and sing.
I miss the days we used to play in the sun and do crazy things.
I miss your smile; it was my sunshine that chased away the rain.
I miss my lips upon your cheek for just one second; here's the thing.
I miss you oh, so much my friend, and I hope we meet again.

Post 2 by Sarah Crossland (Always up for a debate. ) on Monday, 06-Jun-2005 15:35:31

who's the friend? anyone in particular? Or is that a personal question?

Post 3 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Monday, 06-Jun-2005 15:37:11

I don't know if he would want me to tell anyone. This song was not from me to him, but from him to someone else.

Post 4 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Monday, 06-Jun-2005 16:32:25

nice one mel.

i liked it

Post 5 by louiano (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Tuesday, 07-Jun-2005 12:41:23

hmm, it was... me

Post 6 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 07-Jun-2005 14:12:08

See, now, that makes me feel better if he told you himself, LOL.

Post 7 by louiano (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Tuesday, 07-Jun-2005 16:27:05

hmm I would not consider that coment as being part of my answer lol

Post 8 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Saturday, 02-Jul-2005 10:30:10

its a good lyrics for a love song.

Post 9 by season (the invisible soul) on Saturday, 02-Jul-2005 10:38:56

its a good lyrics. great job girl!

Post 10 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 4:00:04

It's a wonderful poem, Mel *hugs*.